the most part less profitable than dishonesty." ~ Plato ~ see mynote at the end of your essay (also, you need the right in-text documentation... There needs to be a new law to protect the home buyers interests in Real Estatetransactions. As in the auto industry, the "Lemon Law" was created to protect auto buyers. So should there be alaw created to protect home buyers. The "Lemon Law" in summary is defined, "The manufacturer, notthe dealer, takes care of the defects" (State Lemon Law n. pag.). I propose a law that states, "the seller,not the buyer, is responsible for intentional disclosures of defects. " A bill, protecting the home buyer, from"raw deals" when investing in real estate. The law and order developed and implemented would createa policy defining the responsibility for; detection, investigation and reporting of dishonest andfraudulent activity outlining specific instructions regarding what should be done when fraud is suspected. Ipropose the bill as the "Sushi Law." semi-colons only join together 2 complete sentences that are related to eachother (at least in 95 percent of the cases). See my example below in blue. At a home I once previewed, I found a large entertainment center in the master bedroomcovering two thirds of a wall. It struck me as odd at the time. Why would this massive piece of furniturebe in a bedroom? As I turned to leave the room, something caught my eye. I saw what lookedlike textured paint on the wall. Upon closer examination, I discovered it was the paint. It had tiny cracks in itlike a dried up puddle of water; the paint was curling at the cracks, characteristic of dried mud. Iconcluded the abnormality was possibly from previous water damage. I didn't say anything, but mostimportantly, neither did the seller. Sellers who try to cover up major problems, defects and abnormalities,before a real estate transaction, are committing fraud, a good reason for implementing my bill. Tointentionally conceal the probl...
