d what exactly he was saying. The whole opening paragraph seemed like a bunch of words thrown down on paper not organized and not in good structure. He should completely redo the first two pages and change the way he words everything.This would be a good biography for a ninth grader to write about himself, but I couldn’t understand why we read this for a journal entry. It wasn’t very touching and it wasn’t very good. I’ve had harder times than that in life. Not much has been happening with me lately. My dog got sick last Thursday night around 3:00 in the morning, but she just had an allergic reaction to something. She is ok now. My birthday is coming up on the 27 of this month, and I’m excited because my parents are coming up for the weekend. That means my pantry and refrigerator will be well stacked and anything else that I need will be taken care of. I think my mom got me some hardware for my drums but I’m not sure, it would be nice though. I went to jail last weekend for a public intoxication charge, which was so ridicules because I wasn’t even drunk. Yeah I was buzzed but you are only supposed to get one if your putting yourself or others endanger, which sitting in a blockbuster parking lot is not doing. Another thing is that the county jail is so disgusting and unhumanitary, I have decided to go and complain to the capital that people who are supposed to get just a ticket should never be stuck in a disgusting place like that.There were a lot of people in jail that night for the same reason and they didn’t do anything wrong either. I don’t like Austin that well right now. I can’t stand the drivers; they really don’t know how to drive. It seems as if I’m behind all old ladies. The roads here were put together by an idiot. I think it was the same guy who did the highways in San Antonio, who killed himself because he knew how much he screwed up. T...
